So, um, let's say that you're reading a YA novel. And let's say that there's some snogging going on. And let's say that the author inserts this interchange about soul mates . . .
Would you *hate* her? For being such a sappy psycho cliche piece of cheese?
Or is the idea not as distressing as I think it is?
And if it *is* as distressing as I think it is . . . Could one of you offer a brilliant substitution that would keep the pace of the plot going? Preferably before tomorrow morning when I . . . I mean, this theoretical author has decided to send it off?
Commit or Omit
5 days ago