Monday, December 17, 2007

Counseling with my conscience, I pondered the thought of victory.

that was a line from a student paper I just graded.

muster all of your creative juice and write me the best next line EVER!!

If you want to guess what grade I gave the paper that birthed that fascinating line, you can do that, too. ;-)

5 comments:

Anonymous said...

"Counseling with my conscience, I pondered the thought of victory. 'Twould be sweet, and yet, my conscience seemed to say, no, failure's better."

Barb said...

It would be so satisfying to beat my smug opponent at his own game, yet in my heart I knew that winning a round of "Sorry" would be a fleeting victory.

Mark- TCM said...

"...and then I licked the bogey and flicked it betwixt my adversaries' eyes, relishing it's short-lived flavour as I witnessed it embrace the thickness of his unibrow."

I'd give myself an A++++!!!!

Mark- TCM said...
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Anonymous said...

mark tcm totally wins.